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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Eff.

    A lot of girls thought Ashton was gorgeous, but not in a football player way. A way where you’re like ‘he’s a man whore’ type person. Especially considering the fact ...

    Mar 26, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Prologue: Killer (edited)

    Yay! I'm the first to review. Sweetness! ok this kinda sucks :( ok this really really sucks lol do your worst ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    Jan 16, 2009
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Breaking Dawn Parody

    Hi! I started reading Twilight about 3 weeks ago (finished all the books within a week) and I love it. I'm not an obsessed fan like my friends (they have ...

    Jan 16, 2009
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: oh well lol

    Wow! Am I the first to review? Awesome! Her muscles spasmed and shook as her consciousness returned. Her eye lids make this one word fluttered open, squinting against the brightness ...

    Jan 10, 2009
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Kyren's last hope

    “Touch him and die.” I snarled, raising my sword. Mira frowned. combine these sentences and it will flow better Orion laughed heartlessly. “And who are you to stand in our ...

    Dec 14, 2008
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Confined

    Hey! School paper, huh? Well I hope this helps. Hey guys! For North Carolina History we have to write a story based during the French and Indian War. This is ...

    Dec 9, 2008
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Warriors Fanfic

    What do you mean? Firestar's quest occurs in the gap between the 1st and 2nd series. But the Prologue takes place during a gathering in ancient times. It's when they ...

    Nov 29, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Pinkdom

    That's super harsh, Chosenofair. It was just a joke (fun) peice, I'm sure! Personally, I liked it. It was funny and it made me smile. :] Kind of like looking ...

    Nov 4, 2008
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Surviving High School

    I guess playerj09 said it all so my only suggestion is that you switch this story to one of the fiction boards. This seems to be a fictional story, with ...

    Oct 26, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: The Lottery by Shirley Jackson

    We had to do a small project on this in English a couple of months ago. Well, all we had to do was pick a phrase and draw a picture. ...

    Oct 25, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Murder On The Orient Express

    I had to read Murder on the Orient Express for 8th grade english last year and felt kind of neutral about it. Only because my teacher made us learn, like, ...

    Oct 25, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Uglies Trilogy

    I read the first three about 2 or so years ago and loved them. I just got the fourth from my school library and started reading it. I just wish ...

    Oct 25, 2008
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: (Needs a title)

    I guess all of the grammar and spelling mistakes have been covered so I'll just tell you what i think. This was a magnificent piece! Very captivating, at first. But ...

    Oct 20, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: I am Legend

    I haven't read the book, but I've seen the movie. (one of my favorite movies ever!!) In fact, I didn't even know there was a book... guess I'll be reading ...

    Oct 19, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My father was killed in Iraq

    Oh my gosh! I'm so sorry for you. He must have been really great... My Dad is in the military too, but has only been to Afghanistan for a year. ...

    Oct 13, 2008


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