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Re: z
This is beautiful! I loved it! In this you described everything perfectly. I like how you decribed her heart being broken. I felt like I was in the poem. This ...
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Re: Chapter 1 Splitter Splatter
Thanks! That means a lot! I will be sure to PM you sometime! I would love to learn how to write poetry! If you need any help writing a short ...
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Re: Overcoming Reality
Well I am glad that I made your day! :)
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Re: Lonely
This is beautiful! Reading this you can actually feel the loneliness engaging from the story. The first part is a attention grabber. It makes you want to keep reading. Even ...
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Re: Chapter 1 Splitter Splatter
Thanks! I will be sure to fix those as soon as possible! :)
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Re: Chapter 1 Splitter Splatter
Sorry Tay01 I wrote the reply to the wrong person.. Anyways thank you so much! I am glad you liked it! You have encouraged me to continue to write with ...
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Re: Chapter 1 Splitter Splatter
Jack, For some odd reason, when I copied this from my word document, it mixed my words around so they got misplaced. Thanks for catching my errors. I will be ...
Jan 4, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1 Splitter Splatter
Jack, For some odd reason, when I copied this from my word document, it mixed my words around so they got misplaced. Thanks for catching my errors. I will be ...
Jan 4, 2015
