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RyanLion - I was very confused as I was reading this! I'm sure you are a great writer but this probably is not one of your better pieces. The end ...

Hey SleeplessEnd! - I like this piece because everyone wants to know what hell is like. And if they will go to hell. Anyways, I enjoyed it! Just like all ...

I like this piece a lot, the way you connect the two unlike things; a basket ball, I did notice one typo! "if you've evr played basketball..." needs to be ...

Dramatic. I like your writing style, it's dramatic. It has a lot of emotion, like a good actor/actress. There are two kinds of people on YSW, the ones that can ...

Insane definitely. I like the title except it seems like it would be a title from a personal narrative. Try something like "The Men In The Ceilings" or "I hear ...

I like this! I didn't even know that it was you, haha. I like the way you title your writings. They make me want to read them. So I'm guessing ...

I likeeee! This has so much feeling in one little piece of writing! I enjoy it! It really takes some special people to write poetry, because I've never took time ...