aer123

This tory didn't work for me. I just tried another genre to see if I had a general or specific quality to my writing. As you can see, I write ...

That is what this is about.

I am still working on part two. Do you know chess?

Remember that this is the first part, the introduction. I assume that the reader would notice only two characters, namely the candidate and Chairman. I name the Candidate, Karpov, in ...

My English teacher, Dr. Peter Farrands, said that when I write I shouldn't compensate for others simplicity. I am not attacking you now, only telling you why I did it ...

If you know about chess the names will tell all. I don't have to write in a simplified way, if the reader needs more info he is allowed to look ...

Thanks to everyone who like this! :) It is very encouraging to hear that I can write well. I based this story on the Nakamura-Carlsen game played in the Gushimov ...

Quite a good review. What you state makes sense, it isn't too harsh! Very well written, helps understanding how to structure it also. I am not used to written Direct ...

The voice is quite good, it creates the atmosphere of someone with a 'no-shit' attitude telling the truth as he perceives it to be.

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