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aer123 here for a review! You give an thorough argument in the essay, and answer the question thoughtfully. What I noticed instantly was the missing words after 'teenage' and the ...

aer123 review time! It is an interesting story you got going here! The opening is quite captivating, as I haven't read the first three chapters. It means that I don't ...

aer123 review time! While reading through the short-story I could follow events clearly, but the spelling mistakes makes the experience weaker than it should be: Words such as: 'u' should ...

Aer123 review time! You repeat 'Don't follow in my footsteps' quite a lot, stylistically this is not very good. Although I get the point your are conveying to the reader, ...

aer123 for a review of your work! It is very, very romantic, descriptive and makes you long for that someone you once loved.... Cleverly written I must say! Very good ...

aer123 for a review: The rhyme in this poem binds the story of the poem nicely together! Very well written as a whole. Structure needs some work, but that is ...

Here for a comment/review. It is well expressed, and I liked your use of past history between the two characters that came in as your mind was remembering all the ...