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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Waiting to be Saved

    Hello, this is a very personal poem, which I admire. I think that it accurately explains how many people with depression can feel very secluded and alone.. well done. On ...

    Jul 3, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Lost in the maze of life

    I feel that many of us can connect to this poem simply because everyone has lost someone. But, this poem explains how a the speaker is morning the loss of ...

    Jul 3, 2018
  • Short Story » Horror, Health Re: Suicide note

    This is an interesting piece, mainly because it is the first piece in which a story talks more about the process of writing a suicide note rather than the emotion ...

    Jul 3, 2018
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: shoddy construction

    I'm not a poetry person at all, but I'm so intrigued by this poem and the message it contains. Absolutely love the description of the house and the faint memories ...

    Jul 3, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Before she is gone

    This poem does an amazing job at drawing the reader in. The woman holds this certain enigma to the reader, which I think allows them to create their own image ...

    Jul 3, 2018
  • Short Story » Spiritual, General Re: The Wise Man and The Barber

    I liked the idea of the man and the barber, but it seems strange that a random barber would ask such a question that is known to separate people. That ...

    Jul 1, 2018
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Narrative Re: What happened to my Flame?

    This piece really speaks volumes towards the growth and confusion that many writers face as they grow older. It spoke to me, in particular, simply because I am in the ...

    Jul 1, 2018


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