adriangarcia

First of all, I love the title. It really set the mood for the poem. Now on to the poem, I felt that it could have been a fantastic poem. ...

I have very mixed feelings about this poem. My initial reaction was wow. Whether it was a certain familiarity with poems I am accustomed to reading or I really was ...

I am not 100% sure I understand this poem. And, I don't know if that is because the message is unclear because of the lack of content or my lax ...

I have to say I didn't really like any of the poem until the last stanza. And that was ruined by your comment "Lol! Thanks for reading." It was kind ...

I will start off by saying first that I did like the poem. A nice mellow tone is comforting and a bit of an autobiographical theme is nice. However, I ...

I really enjoyed this poem. It was really nice. A problem with young writers, including myself, is the stress we put into each 'work.' So much stress that it ends ...

I was a little confused which is to be expected from any poem. But, I was confused in that after I read and re-read I still wasn't able to really ...

I have to disagree with a lot of what people are saying. Art (i.e. Poetry, Novels, Plays, ETC.) reflects life. And, teenage life is for a lot of us now. ...

I have to say I really like it. I do agree that a bass roars. In fact, it often growls. The last line in the first stanza seems un-relatable. If ...

I get the message and in general it's good. But, it is too short. And, in dealing with short poetry (and being successful), you will be up against such poets ...

I actually do like this poem. However, this poem sounds like I've heard it before. The actual subject 'Man's morality' is very ... basic. And, if you did base your ...