adelina

I'm glad you liked it ,about "honesty" in that context it would be wrong english so I'll keep that as it is other than about the grammatical errors I'll have ...

this is natasha again, this time i liked what you have written. it was crisp and clear just one doubt who is anima best of luck

ummmm...... ok I've read two reviews so far one is telling me to use caps the other not to use caps. um?????

hey, this a great start, keep going it's sure to be a great story can't wait

nice story it's really cool adel

i think my hands are struggling to type because i'm trying to keep my sanity THIS WAS AMAZING KEEP WRITING THIS NOVEL PLEASE, ihave a question is the guy almost ...

i usually don't get poems but i totally get this one i liked it adel

you know something I think love the character i mean the way you've devoloped him is just cool nice bro adel

nice i thought it was cool adel

i liked this story, it's got this cutting edge and it's different. i like the names you've used by the way, stu sound cool adelina

dude nice job keep it up adelina

i'm speechless seriously, but you do have to work on your character speech adelina

tnx, i justthought i should give a proper introduction for my character