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I think this is really good. Try not to use I too much as we already know you are talking about yourself. Other than that keep up the hood work ...

I thought Human traces was an excellent book. At times it can seem to drag but overall it is an amazing book. Gahks, it is worth considering as it is ...

I actually thought this was excellent :) I really want to know what happens next. What part of the first chapter is it? the beginning middle or end?

What could be good with this is you found another word to use for drink and kept us guessing and didn't mention until the end that the narrative was about ...