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This is a nicely written piece that flows fairly well overall. I think it's got a sort of subtle beauty in the vagueness of the writing. I usually prefer poems ...

Hi here for a short review! This poem is well written and I love the imagery. I'm not used to reviewing many works so I don't have much advice to ...

thank you for the suggestions, I've just finished editing it a bit. please feel free to let me know if there is anything else that catches your attention.

It is omniscient, sorry it isn't the clearest, I'll try to fix that in my next one. As for the It to He, I didn't even realize I'd done that ...

I love the wording of this piece, it's beautiful. I enjoy how the perspective is that of a young girl, it adds character and more meaning to the poem. The ...

Hello, you've written a great poem here. I love the emotion in it, it's like I can feel it myself. It flows nicely, but maybe if there were certain words ...