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Hey, it's Adam here to review... 1. who said, it's alright. You were the one who broke up our fights. You were the one who kissed me goodnight. You were ...

Review timeeee :D 1. I really like the short line! They add impact and keep the flow going well. I can see you're not going for a rythm and they ...

Hey, another quick review. 1. The cars rush below the bridge, almost like your lies rushed around me. This is a fairly weak simile, you need to remove the almost ...

Hey, here's a quick review :D 1. All the whole while I fake smile. somehow it feels like it should be 'fake a smile'. 2. I love the way you ...

Howdy, Adam is here to review a cute little poem :) 1. How 'bout not Ok, please look at changing this! Even if it is only to "how 'bout no" ...

Hey roon, I am going to take a quick look at "best friend syndrome". 1. What is it that you’re trying to reach? I think this question could be more ...

Ok, there could have been alot more to this poem. It does need some extra wow factor or real twist rather than following a classic suicide poem plot. However, the ...

Great poem! I may just quit writing now :P But... a couple of comments: 1. "It pays no rent to you yet you so" this line is just a bit ...