achakravarthi9

A really captivating piece of work. I noticed that you tend to use a single word too many times. And the following line made little sense : 'Introverted they call ...

Hi. I really liked your work but I think it would look better with punctuations. The words you use, weaves the poem into a series of complex emotions that might ...

it's a beautiful poem. But it would sound better with punctuations. Keep writing! -A