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Re: A Summer Storm
I love this style of poetry. It kind of reminds me of a villanelle... OOH and I loved this line: Rain is still falling onto the ground. It caresses the ...
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: A poem I found..
Haahaha, wow. This is pretty impressive for 1st or 2nd grade...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Tonight
Thank you all soo much for the reviews! I just wanna clear up a few things first: Navita: We, refers to me and my friend. I know that I didn't ...
Jun 25, 2010 -
Re: Escape
LOVE THIS. :] Keep on writing!
Jun 19, 2010 -
Re: Simple Memories
I have to agree. Anyone can relate to this. It's sweet, fragile, and simple :]
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: ...
Short. Interesting. I'd love to read more. It seems like you're talking a bit more about the tree than the weed. Balance it out.
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: I need you.
Sad poem. But thats alright. It seemed like you wrote it pretty hurriedly. It would make a nice poem if you sat down and spent a little more time on ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: Addictions (1) -Edited-
“Yeah, meet someone knew. Not-a-douche,” she stated happily. 'knew' should be 'new'. but other than that: its a good beginning :]
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: Anna and Ryan- their story
This is cuuute :] Some of the sentences need to be reconstructed. and it felt like the story was moving too quickly. but other than that: it was short and ...
Apr 5, 2010