Simple Memories

Hi there

General comments

I really liked it. As the above comments said anyone who reads can relate to it. I can relate better because I am kind of in the same situation. the message of this song was very clear which I liked a lot.

Rhyme and Rhythm

The rhyme scheme used is pretty simple, but is good for this song. It was not rhyming too much and neither was it too little, it was just perfect. The rhythm was also good. The song flowed pretty well in my head.

Overall

Overall I think the song was pretty good. It was simple and straight forward. I liked it very much.

Good Job

Keep Writing

~Anshita

I have to agree. Anyone can relate to this. It's sweet, fragile, and simple :]

I really like this, I really do. Because, the thing is, that
anyone that reads this could relate to it, it being a parent they never
met, a lost loved one, an old best freind, ect. So please, I'd love to
see more of your work, so dont freak out if you find me on some of your other posts. (:
-Kat