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Re: To My Future Daughter
I don't know if this will make any sense, but I literally FELT this poem. Don't pay attention to what other people say, haha. It's great! :) It actually made ...
Oct 20, 2012 -
Re: The Beauty in Sorrow
Hey there. Let me start by saying this is really well written. :) Okay, now.. There is something profoundly beautiful about sadness, a longing for a loss, gazing at the ...
Sep 16, 2012 -
Re: Metaphors
Hey. Let me start by saying, I loved this. Secondly, my favorite part of it is "If the art of comparing ideas was like black inked rains, I'd be the ...
Sep 15, 2012 -
Re: control freak
May I just say.. This. Is. Amazing. I like how you repeated "I need control again." three times through out it. Great job, Persy. GREAT GREAT JOB! :)
Sep 15, 2012