ab2heaven

hey....its a good poem there!! U did try to bring the aspects of relationships! and all of them are very true! But i got confused with rhyming pattern.Every poem should ...

Nice poem! I think you have captivated the topic prettly well!*applauds*Internet does have it duel aspect that you is a shame and that people would use it for the negatives.I ...

Hey.....inspired by love huh? Its beautiful really! There are lot of complications in love but if you truly like that person i think it is worth fighting for in the ...

Hey....its really beautiful u know....very realistic and true! I truly felt connected t it! Wow..Its just great how you highlighted the simple aspects of life that go unnoticed!We must truly ...

Very well written i must say! Just a thought that you can can make it little bit lengthier.Something about hope may be! Its very apt and precise and it conveys ...

wow!!! very interesting!! its good! but there are some some mistakes..Hope you can correct them!! It truly captures the emotions! just didn't understand what this line meant: "he pets her ...