aaboo17

I didn't put a lot of details in the first chapter because as the story goes on you find more out about Chloe, and other characters. The first chapter you ...

Actually she has no powers..... YET. Can't give away much details. But she is depressed, it has something to do with the death of her best friend. Later on in ...

Yes please!

Ohhhh! Okay I understand now. Well I'm looking forward to reading more that you write! :)

This is great start to a book or story. It's mysterious and keeps the reader wanting more! I like the idea you have going for with the plot of this ...

I love this. And I'm picky when it comes to stories, yet I like yours. You word your sentences so right that it puts a picture in the readers mind. ...

Yeah, nope people just say they don't like it :/ im really glad you do though!!

I'll let you know when i post it :)

I'm rewriting the story. Too many bad reviews...

And i put it up for reviews... but when people harp and nit pick at my story. Saying only bad things, yeah i get pretty mad. I said both comments ...

I wasn't saying that to be nice. -Ally

thanks for nit picking at my story again... -Ally

chapters 2 and 3 are out now.

The title is referring to Lou and Bryan's party... you'll see why. People have nit picked on why my characters aren't mentally developed yet. I'm doing it on purpose. Everything ...

I put 16 because some words in the chapters. It may seem fast-paced but that's because the parents want to get rid of her. You dont get to hear much ...