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Re: sucking on ice cubes
I can't grasp the meaning, but it's very good use of words considering the vagueness and variety in them, and they all give a certain calm and cold image/feeling. Imagine ...
Sep 22, 2012 -
Re: Hopes and Dreams
There are several things in here that I can relate to as there things that I've many a times thought and felt for, like the alienation felt from peers just ...
Sep 22, 2012 -
Re: A Lowly Thread
First off, I LOVE forests and walking through them, so I'm obliged to like that aspect of the poem haha. Also, your words flowed very well, both with the rhyming ...
Sep 22, 2012 -
Re: I Know Why The Caged Dog Bites
I liked the format, poetry but not written in a poetic format. It seems like when you read poems, your mind automatically goes to reading certain ways, but writing like ...
Sep 22, 2012
