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aVeryThoughtfulBeing

  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Narrative Re: sucking on ice cubes

    I can't grasp the meaning, but it's very good use of words considering the vagueness and variety in them, and they all give a certain calm and cold image/feeling. Imagine ...

    Sep 22, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Hopes and Dreams

    There are several things in here that I can relate to as there things that I've many a times thought and felt for, like the alienation felt from peers just ...

    Sep 22, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Lowly Thread

    First off, I LOVE forests and walking through them, so I'm obliged to like that aspect of the poem haha. Also, your words flowed very well, both with the rhyming ...

    Sep 22, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, Fanfiction Re: I Know Why The Caged Dog Bites

    I liked the format, poetry but not written in a poetic format. It seems like when you read poems, your mind automatically goes to reading certain ways, but writing like ...

    Sep 22, 2012


And on the pedestal these words appear:/'My name is Ozymandias, king of kings;/Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!'/Nothing beside remains.
— Percy Bysshe Shelley