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  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Pokemon

    Hello, EvilWithinIn! I'm here for the review you requested, but let me say there isn't much for me to do! This was a wonderfully detailed piece of work that flew ...

    Feb 16, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Shadow Whisperers- Mortiod

    I must agree with Snow. This is an excellent read and kept me going until the end. The only thing that bothered me, however, was how fast it seemed to ...

    Feb 12, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Haze (Ch. 1)

    Hello, Cspr! You're one of my first reviews in months here, so please excuse me if I sound a bit rusty. Admittedly, I was a bit confuse reading this. Don't ...

    Feb 12, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Disease

    Ello Chicken! Welcome to YWS! :D I'm here to review your piece and hopefully you're doing the same for others to get points and a better chance for more others ...

    Apr 16, 2011
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: 1930's Narrative

    Ello Fort! :3 I going to review your piece for you so let me tell you my way of reviewing. Spelling/grammar corrections will be in red , original in italics ...

    Apr 16, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Deleted

    Ello MandaPanda! :D I am here to review your piece. Now here are some pointers on how my reviews work: Spelling/grammar errors will be in red , the original in ...

    Apr 16, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: King of Pirates, Queen of Soul 1

    Ello Major! I've come to review your piece as you can plainly see. :P So let me give you the works on how I review so you understand as I ...

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Siren's Call *Part 3*

    Ello Clinical! I'm back to review your pieces again. Sorry I didn't get to this one until really late, but so many things slip my mind and it's not until ...

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Apocalypse: From a Zombie's perspective

    :D Love it! This is a pretty cool piece, I must say. And it satisfies my love for zombies(As you can see). You tied in humor with seriousness and I ...

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: My Aborted Child

    This was one of the most moving and strongest pieces I have read in a long time. I'm not really going to review in though because I can see so ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Nobles and Beggars: Chapter 2

    Ello again! I guess I should have clicked the Novel button before saying to message me about part two :P Let's see if this time I'll quote he entire story ...

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Nobles and Beggars: Chapter 1

    Ello WaitingForLife! :D I'm here to review your piece(Of course). Now, spelling mistakes will be red , original text in italic, comments or questions I have in blue , original ...

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Siren's Call *Part 2*

    Ello ClinicalCynic! I'm here to review your piece! Again! :P I didn't expect another posted so soon. Be careful though. You can only post two things a day before you ...

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Medic Man

    I like the way you wrote this. :D It's different from what I see on here usually. Though it was confusing because I didn't understand what was happening and what ...

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Script » General, General Re: The Teachers (a screenplay) [part 1]

    I LOVED this! It made me laugh so many times! XD It was a very enjoyable read and I can't wait for part two. The only thing I would add ...

    Jan 26, 2011


You are all the colours in one, at full brightness.
— Jennifer Niven, 'All the Bright Places'