Zontafer

Hey Writer. Yes, I am reviewing a poem, okay? Nitpicks Don't hope for something too far out of reach, because you won't reach it. Add far. And that's what makes ...

Hey Willow! I was looking for things to review, and I realized I never reviewed chapter 19, so here I am. ^^ Nitpicks/Suggestions Her words were smooth as silk and ...

Hey Alchemist! ^^ Before going on to the nitpicks, I just gotta say that I loved your 4th paragraph, where you described the city! You only spent a few simple ...

*beats procrastination* Hey Wolf! ^^ Now I'm just gonna speak about my favorite parts, so prepare for the 'curious-me'. :3 First off... WHAT'S AN EPOLIS? Like seriously, I was really ...

Hey there! The ending! :o Woah, I really want to go and read the next chapter already. Your plot is so awesome, and you keep it fresh and exciting all ...

Hey Therese! First time I'm ever reviewing one of your works, so this'll be fun! *laughs evily* Not a single bleat of a goat could be heard. Not even a ...

Hello again! Nitpicks But still they pressed on. v Nevertheless, they pressed on. But is okay to start a sentence with, but I'd still suggest you to replace it. It ...

Hey there, beans! I can see that you're new to YWS, so first off: Welcome to YWS! ^^ One thing here is that when you post long stories, people seem ...

Hey there! ^^ As four people have already been here before me, I have little to say, but I'll still give it a shot. We gave you the famous Peach ...

Hello, Zontafer here for a review! I didn't exactly get this, but then I read some of your comments below and I got it. xD You clicked the Publishing Center, ...

Zontafer here! I'm not Christian but I decided to review this anyways, since it looks good! I like how you started out with only rhyming the 2nd, 4th, 5th and ...

Hey there, Zontafer here to review your work! First off, I'd just like to tell you that I don't know anything about scripts, so I thought I could rather focus ...

Hello! Zontafer to review your work! I really liked this short! It reminded me of Norse Mythology/Middle Earth (Tolkien). One thing I don't get is why this is written in ...

Zontafer here to review your work! First off, I started grinning to myself a bit. I remember when I was younger and how afraid I was of dogs, because a ...

Hey there, Zontafer here to review your work! I can see you named the title 'Untitled~Prologue'. Does that mean you will be writing more of this story, like chapters? Is ...