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If I could find someone willing to sing what I think up, and do it as intended, than I would finish, but it just feels pointless when it can't be ...

Thank you, for the helpful review. Also its intended to be dames, word play.

Nope, was part of a challenge I was given that picture to base a story off of. Yay it only took 15 re-tries! It's rare because of of how hard ...

Hm, polluted romance was repeated for emphasis, as par the title of the story, I figured 3 times would be balanced, but if the point is missed then it may ...

Also, I am going to review everyone who reviewed me, so anything you specifically would like a massively detailed review of? (yes this question is copy/paste, I happen to be ...

Also, I am going to review everyone who reviewed me, so anything you specifically would like a massively detailed review of? (yes this question is copy/paste, I happen to be ...

Also, I am going to review everyone who reviewed me, so anything you specifically would like a massively detailed review of? (yes this question is copy/paste, I happen to be ...

Also, I am going to review everyone who reviewed me, so anything you specifically would like a massively detailed review of? (yes this question is copy/paste, I happen to be ...

Hm....the mixed punctuation was intentional, but good point, the intent was to push the state of mind, but I may have just annoyed. Also, I am going to review everyone ...

The moment I ask for help on something, you could announce its the most revolting wall of text you ever read, and all you would get is more questions on ...

Yes, thank you for mentioning the opening, as i said this is a super wip, not only is it a work in progress, its a work in progress from when ...

Also, I am going to review everyone who reviewed me, so anything you specifically would like a massively detailed review of? (yes this question is copy/paste, I happen to be ...

An intro at most should only be a page or two, they are sort of like the teaser to a movie, hinting at something that will happen later on in ...

Hm, when I write a chapter I like to imagine it like a full on eps, there is an opening some event takes place, or something is discovered, and then ...

no, I don't mean that. I understand that but when half the readers mix up the characters, it's a sign there is something I need to look into a bit ...