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hm, its really frustrating me, how can I make it any clearer, I say exactly who they are over a dozen times, make references to their distinct appearances, I really ...

Honestly I ask of you or anyone else explain it to me, I literally called him a robot repeatedly from the start to finish, call him the sentinel repeatedly, and ...

The Sentinal is a robot and the red headed girl is a human, however from the perspective of a robot, it is simply a creature, I tried very hard to ...

Also while I rather not explain art, I will mention that the poem personifies, body, mind, and soul using symbolism, technically creating 3 different poems put together.

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hm, like the above that I commented to, all I can say is thank you and happy that you enjoyed.

: D : D : D : D : D Thank you is all I can think to say. Happy you liked it is another thing.

The simi broken nature of this poem is something that I like to call, "qualified reaction" it's intentionally warped for the sake of interpretation, with some of the stanzas later ...

Poetry is not really about knowing what your doing, its about finding an emotion, and trying to express it so hard that other people start being filled with said emotion. ...

Thank you for your suggestions and thoughts, (and the complement for how I describe things :D) Don't worry about ever offending someone who wishes to improve, if they ask for ...

If you can see this next time you log on, sorry for the slow reply, was waiting to see what would happen and how many people would react, thank you ...