Zion

Wow, this was harsh. But I accept it gladly. Thanks G. :D I'll get on it as soon as I have the time. You might dont know, but Im macedonian, ...

Thanks Rei ;)

-Sir Jonathan…-she frowned-Something happened near the city square. The city might be in danger. -As much as I enjoy your presence, Andara, I can’t let you in. Orders you know. ...

wow I never thought I would red a fairy tale. I was wrong

Oh thanks a bunch Nai. I really apreciate it. I didnt relize how many grammar mistakes I've made XD About the names. I have a HUGE problem with names. I ...

Not much of a poetry guy, but I liked it. Mostly I liked it, cuz its easy to picture it in your head. To vizualize and invoke emotions.

DOUBLE LMAO!

Hey I had the same thought as well. THANX hawk!

Thanx Mesh. I will change them :wink:

heres the otehr part. its not much though. __________________________________ -I DID! - someone yelled from above him. On the roof of a small house, in front of the noon sun ...

:lol: thnx crisy! here's the next part of it. _________________________________________ The campsite where Yunero had his last roasted deer. Eclo didn’t seem to bother too much with the situation. M

WOW Crysi thanks you're the best! :D Acctually I continued writing it, so I plan to post the other part as well. I know my writing skills are not that ...

Mother Erendil, the haven of the Elven nation, my home... 8) :D

Thanx mesh! You're great. And yeah, I think it to be a short novel of some sorts. Bu who now it might even turn out as a trilogy? :P :D

Ok here's the first part of the chapter so it will be less confuzing: ____________________________________________________ 1 e The sun rises slowly from the Dragonpeek mountains. With it, the bustling