Zion

For the sake of rationality and simplicity my critique for this story shall be summed into a single, seven letter word.. Almighty! Hhahahahhahahahhaahhhahaha! *inhales* ...and again hahahhahahahahahah

I know of him....quite well in fact...what seems to be the problem?

Technamericana is an expression I use when it comes to the american clubbing scene. The rave nights are weird dahling, they are chaotic and wild. I wanted to apply the ...

::hugs:: Thanks Hekate :) I try my est im still a beginner at poems :D Side note: I DO know how to properly pronounce Hekate :wink:

Thx for the lovely comments everyone. :D

*grins* Me is happy. I was mentioned *grins*

WHAT in the name of jarred pickles is Ogling? rolf! Anyway, good stuff... ;)

tnx for the detailed comment about the colours...its supposed to be, cuz its on the top of the tallest moutain. Also the place is sort of a gateway and all

hm....interesting...

(modified version) The large wooden door creaked as it slowly opened. The white candles from the hall illuminated the small room and the silluethe of a large man in robes ...

(modified version) The large wooden door creaked as it slowly opened. The white candles from the hall illuminated the small room and the silluethe of a large man in robes ...

hm....nice nice...really good :D

thx a bunch Matt. Im still a noob at poetry. lol :P :D

CL i take it you consider thineself indigo as well? The poems were amazing i love them. Are these like, three classes/types of indigos?

Interesting....very interesting work of art. I love this. It dives in...the philosophy (?) of the oldest buisness in the world. WOnderful perception.