Zekkie876

nice job I've read the Ranger's Apprentice series, and I must say that you did a great job You wrote in a way that I felt like I was reading ...

I really liked this poem, and I thought it was amazng Really nice job Now I want to see when the moon is bigger than the sun :)

A new novel, Ghost Story, is coming out, but I don't know when

loved it

Thi is really good, and like all the other guys, I loved the Giver. keep up the good work!

I really liked it, gives an exhilirating opening to what seems like a nice piece. The errors are pretty much summed up above me goodjob :)

I agree with wickedwonder This was too short for a good fiction piece w/substance If you added on, I am sure that it will be amazing!

This is cool! I haven't red your first part, but I am going to! Overall, this was good, with just a very few minor errors can't wait for more :)!

I loved this piece, the way you depicted Susan was amazing I'm a guy and I admit I got emotional at the end goo job

a good piece, and I understand that the work is not finished yet I recommend just a few adjustments, but nothing major. Overall, I enjoyed it Looks like something that ...

I agree with Justin. I liked the poem, but just a few adjustments should be made. Overall, good job :)

This was AMAZING its been awhile since I've read such a deep, rhythmic poem such as this. It really astounds me. AWESOME JOB! :)

Thanks! It wasn't nitpicky, I really appreciated it! You gave me some helpful critique that I really hadn't seen when I typed it up. You have helped me alot. About ...