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Oh my god! Honestly that is the only thing I have to say to this, because it is amazing. Going into this I was expecting something kinda lame but it ...

I really liked this and I thought it was cool. It was well written in the way you described things. It has a cool mystical feeling to it. I really ...

Okay first things first, I really enjoyed the idea of this story. It's honestly something I haven't seen anything like this before so ten points for originality but there were ...

I really loved this. I'm not a poet, not at all. The only time I have ever written a poem was for English and it sucked. But this is truly ...

I'm very glad to hear you are doing better. I liked the powerful words you used in it and it was well written to what I could have seen. I ...

Okay wow honey, you used the word "home" way to much in this. Maybe next time try use synonyms like referring to the house as "the estate" or even not ...

Hey there, So Jumpyspot pretty much hit everything I was going to tell you but I might as well put in some opinions to right? So the first thing I ...

I really liked this and I want to hear more but I do have some suggestions for you. First thing why was she so nervous when her parents were only ...

I really enjoyed reading this. I connect with Kai in a way. I too love graveyards or as I call them cemeteries. I live across the street from one and ...

I really liked this, great descriptions and powerful words. I think you expressed grief and pain of a morning person very well. The ending left you wanted to hear more ...

I really did truly love this story. It was fantastic. It made me hold my breath and made my heart stop mid beat. Amazingly brilliant. I presume there is not ...

Okay, I like it so far but I have some suggestions for you. First of all there are a couple grammatical mistakes here and there that I thought you should ...

I really enjoyed this. It left me thinking about what would happen next and how the main character got herself into that bind (well if it is a her.) but ...