ZaddieCaso

Hey, I'm Izzy. Just giving you a quick review :] Hiding things was what I did best. I like this first line a lot, it drew me in. I always ...

Hey Ella, I know you actually play alot of these on the piano and such. Is this one of them? If it is I suggest putting the notes of the ...

Hey Danny! Sorry it took me so long to get to a review. Well I'm here now :] I have to say because I'm a little miffed with this chapter. ...

Hey Vernon, you gonna rip apart my poem so I thought I'd return the favor :lol: Here we are the 21st century, ahead and aware of it all. Machines and ...

Hey I'm not sure I can hold myself together to write something decent here, not enough to tell you how this poem makes me feel anyway. Wordless. Izzy ps.I'm not ...

Hey Mads, Firstly I'd like to say although I think this was written well I really don't like it. It's too predictable and plays across lots of cliches. The whole ...

Hi Rose, just giving you a quick review :) The world was gray – all parts of it Okay as a first sentence it does draw me in but I ...

Hi Julie, Izzy again. Just giving you a quick review :) Firstly I shall tell you what EllyMelly told me; Everytime That you start a new line Inside a Poem's ...

Hi Calben, Welcome to YWS, why don't you come down to the welcome forum to introdce yourself :) I'm ZaddieCaso by the way, but people call me Izzy. Okay, The ...

Hi Vera, I'm Izzy This is a lovely little piece. I would agree with Kinera as this needs to be more spaced into verses. While I edit I shall just ...

Hi roon, I'm Izzy, just gonna give you a quick review. I have to say I looked through this and I was enchanted, what a wonderful piece. You have obviously ...

Hi, I'm Izzy. Welcome to YWS! On YWS we have a few rules; -Please rate your work. This allows it to show up on the YWS main page if it's ...

Hi Jazmine, Welcome to YWS, why not come down to the welcome forum and introduce yourself. On YWS we always try to check out grammar and edit our work the ...

Hi elly, What I would say is that I think you should keep the cliches. This is what your poem plays off, almost a kind of sing song poem. I ...

Hi Elly, I've seen you around on the site a lot but I don't think I've ever reviewed anything of yours, so here goes Okay, I didn't actually find many ...