Zackymas

Hey there~ Thanks for the deep review :D And you are totally correct with those lines. To write this story I tapped on my own anxiety and depression, and part ...

The prose was about the admiration of fire in my world building project ^-^ I didn't think I'd need to explain that setting since this prose has meaning of its ...

Hello there and thanks for the extensive review! :D It really helped me see some things I hadn't noticed before :3

Thanks for the review! :D Welcome to the site by the way ;)

No problem, all kind of feedback is appreciated :) Thanks for the review :D

Hey there, thanks for the review :D "It is not the same as giving myself to the clay." I meant giving up; clay is a form of dirt, the expression ...

Honestly, I also think it's wrong grammar. This was more like an exercise, I needed a random sentence and "Anything is at it seems" is what I got so I ...

Thanks for the reply. Your reply confused me a bit in some areas to be honest, so if you could clarify what I'm about to point that'd be awesome :) ...

So now that some edit's been done. Whatdaya' think? :v

Oh I also forgot to mention, the dagger being called 'small' and the MC being refereed to as child' both are closely engaged with almost the same meaning. It's about ...

Thanks for reviewing :D "Okay, comma after 'time'. 'Centuries ago' isn't necessary since you said 'when knights' then we already know it was probably in the medieval ages." I already ...

Thanks a lot for this beautiful review :D but yeah that first sentence was feeling a little off place when writing it, I didn't really have time to check it ...

Thank you very much for this deep insight in poetry punctuiation :D MkII will definitely see that :3 Well the poem is actually part of an in-story book called 'The ...

Thanks :D I did intend to rhyme but I couldn't find the words for some verses so I decided to not make the whole thing rhyme, but just in the ...

Thanks :D I'm pretty new to poetry so punctuation is not something I really have set on stone regarding it :p but I'll definitely correct them asap ;3