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Don't play it too safe.

Greetings!

Hello, thanks for the hard work in editing. I do apologize for not being more clear with this exercise. This particular piece is a freewrite without restrictions. It is a ...

Repetition was on purpose. Good catch with, "weeze."

Strange, This is a clever little piece; someone may even call it cute. I like how short it is. You might even try to make it shorter somehow. Try to ...

Spanaki93, Congrats on completing a poem; not many people can write cohesively, and poetry has its very own niche that baffles completion. Also, posting for others to read takes courage ...

Thanks so much Nate!! Long time no write. Hope all's well; I'm always appreciative of your work with the site. Thanks. Wow, it's a rather pleasant feeling that you were ...

Hello, long time no write. Those Giant sure suck right now, eh? As to the poem, I make it difficult to read on purpose for some reason I cannot explain. ...

That would be the 'HANDSOME man in blue' right? *wink* These colors are too distracting to me, just make it all the same color... ~Z

Possibly entering into a contest of Short Story... -Z

Whoa! It's been some time I've been in this forum, as I don't have much time to edit nor post stories... Sorry folks! I'll reply to each and everyone of ...

Thanks!... That was thought out! Oh, real quick... Changing past tense to present, what does that mean? jk Seriously, that would look weird if used passed. I think there is ...

That took so long to read, I can't hink of any other places that needed work just yet, I'll have a look later or tomorrow. Promise! Like it so far ...

Confused... :? Don't really understand where you're going... -Z

My, you are good! You found the two sentences that I thought were a little off too. The decription of the Competition and the Asking of an Inn... Very well ...