Yuriiko

Hey there Hope! First of all, I like the opening and much more with the ending. The story concept is nice because it gives bit of a message to the ...

Hello there! First of all, this is a very sweet short story. I understand your writing style, you leave your readers some questions and it's up to them how they'd ...

Hello there Goa! The only problem that you have here is your rhyming inconsistencies. At first, there were no rhyming patterns but then as I came across with the second ...

Ash: Pokemon, I choose you to review Azila's work! Me: *jumps in* No problem! Hey there Azila. *waves* Your request has surely made me happy! First of all, you have ...

Hey there, Affa! First of all, this piece is really powerful, especially the tone of the speaker. I was quite surprised when the swearing welcomed me, and I knew right ...

One Saturday night, a dead terrorist with her black cloak and mask, came down from Purgatory to review Azila's work. Hello there! I apologize for the delay because I just ...

When I read the title, I was like, "Can we pretend the airplanes in the night sky like a shooting star? I could really use a wish right now, wish ...

Hello there, Emma! Welcome to YWS! I hope you're enjoying your stay as much as we do. :wink: First of all, this is pretty short but I get the message ...

Hey there Shubhi! I'm so glad to review this first. It has been days and weeks since I have read the last chapter of this novel. ^^ He stared at ...

Hey there! I stepped out into the harsh fluorescent lighting of the cafeteria and away from the aggressive students who were still pushing to get a hold of their lunches. ...

Hello dad! Yes, we're competitors but you helped me on my entry too, so to show you my sincerest gratitude, I'm here to review! I actually read this story before ...

Knock! Knock! May I come in? Well, let's just pretend you allowed me to, and so I'm here to review, Shrub! :D The worst that could happen was this place ...

Hey there, WPrincess! I imagined a little girl reading this and it seems so cute. And of course, this is a bit creepy. The pace is good since there are ...

So, I've decided to start up a young writer's society blog/page... however this thing works. Just a clarification. Are you writing this for a blog? If so, you can see ...

Hello there! Here as promised. I just want to say that I'm not really a poem person but I'll give this a shot. :wink: First of all, I would like ...