Yuriiko

Hello there! What a humorous piece you have here. Considering that you have written his one way way back, I like this. And especially Sylvester, I adore the way you ...

Hello xDudettex! Even though this is a flash fiction, the emotions coming from the narrator is so strong that it had kept me reading until the last word. I can ...

Making my way downtown, walking fast--- Hello DramaLlama! I'm here to review something of yours again. ^^ Unlocking my apartment door, I wandered in and collapsed on the couch I ...

Hello! This is a very rough draft. I don't think I still need to clarify about your grammars, spellings, letter cases and punctuation. The reviewers above me has beat me ...

Hey DramaLlama! I'm here since I noticed this hasn't gotten any reviews yet. And I want to tell you though that I haven't really read the chapters before this. So, ...

Hello there! This is a strong piece you got here. Your character expresses her thoughts and emotions very well. And I believe it is what that added to the good ...

Hey there Shubhiness! Here as requested. .< Or do you mean the cooling effect of the rain, that it's cold sliding down on her cheeks? I pull my shawl tighter ...

I won’t loose to you ever again. Lose This is a good open letter. The voice of the narrator draws out emotion very well, it kept my attention until the ...

Hello Iceprincess! I have to be honest. When I first read the whole story, I didn't actually get those italicized phrases distributed on some parts of the story... until I ...

Hey Silentwords! I knew that I had to do something, but my numb legs wouldn’t budge. They felt like two tree trunks that had grown roots deep into the hardwood ...

Hello! *waves* Finally! Summer hit us sooner than soon. Yes, it is June sixteenth, but it's still summer. (It's a bit repetitive on how you express the early summer. Try ...

And this what happens when you review something in a short delay. Hello Kagi! I skimmed some reviews and thought they have pretty much beat me to it. Well, I ...

Hello there! I'm sorry this took me some days to get this reviewed. But anyways, I hope this better be worth all the wait. :) Hmm. You have an interesting ...

Hello IKnowAll! I apologize for the delay and hope this will be worth the wait. ^^ After all, it was only ~1/100 the gravity of my home world. World 0, ...

Aloha Rooh27! I was tired, I was frustrated and I was lonely. My legs were hurting and I did not have a penny in my pocket. I’m really alone, without ...