Yuriiko

Hi there Seana! Here to review! Comments and suggestions in RED. this is just part one guys, whether I carry on with it or not depends on what ya'll think. ...

Hi kyousuke! Here as requested. I grasped her legs tighter and turned towards the closest forest behind (the) spacious rice fields. How about recalling his position? I know this is ...

Hello there Lani! Here as requested. I'm terribly sorry for not automatically reviewing this. It's because my account here acted weird this past few days. Hope you understand. First of ...

Hi there, Anzius! Here as requested. Sorry for the quite delay of this. I haven't been able to log in the last few days due to the fact that my ...

Hello there JP! Here as requested. First of all, thanks for the request. :) I won't really nitpick every line because I think this is pretty well written and quite ...

Hello there! Here to you-know-it. It was yet another peaceful autumn day. I find this as an average sentence but always think that this is the part where you grab ...

Hello there! I think you're new. So I just want to say that if you're writing a poem, be sure to do a good format of it. It seems like ...

*swims in the ocean* Hello AquaMarine! Here to review. Nitpicks on the way! Oh, comedy: h e could come with a smile, twitching deft fingers, and a lashing wit - ...

Hello there! Here to review. This piece is neat and clean but a total cliffhanger! :smt036 I find this interesting and a bit refreshing, especially when you chose the beach ...

Hello there, WW! Here as requested. I won't go nitpick everything because others have pretty covered up those errors already. Sorry in advance if there's any repetition going over here, ...

Hello there, Lum-eh! *laughs* The only thing that really bothers me is... nothing. haha. As far as I could see, this is very well-written and the things that I like ...

Hello there, Solva! Here as requested. :wink: Commmets and suggestions in RED. I was eating a big chocolate ice cream, and feeling the water splashing from the white fountain of ...

Hello there, BlackBird! Here as requested and I'm sorry for the quite delay of this. it's just because you caught me up during school. :wink: First off, I'm not going ...

Hello there, Shubhi! Here as requested. :wink: Sorry, if there's going to be a repetition of nitpicks and corrections, it's because I didn't really have the time to pause and ...

Hello there, Wooster! Here as requested. :wink: :arrow: Point of Views and Characters: Switching POV's confused me a bit. For one thing, the connection between the wolf, unicorn and the ...