Yuriiko

Hello there Blackbird! Here as requested. First of all, I just want to thank you for the request and hope I could be of a help. Now on to the ...

Hello there, katchaerin! Here to review. First of all, I just wanted to say that I'm living in the same country as yours but not specifically. Plus, I like your ...

Hello there, King! Here to review. Okay, so Vampyre has pretty much covered up all about the flow and I won't bother much about it anymore. I try to find ...

Hey there, Scar! Here to review. First and foremost, I have to admit that I had been a writer who capitalized every first letter of the line... which is basically ...

Hello there! I think you have much more up to your sleeve than what you're offering right here, Charlie. This has potential and I feel so sorry if ever this ...

Hey there, amu! Here to you-know-what. :wink: MALL FOODCOURT-MID-DAY (We open to a close up of Stacy's face, she looks determined as she walks forward. We zoom out to see ...

Hello there! Here to review. Comments and suggestions in RED . Chapter One: A Stroll Through The Forest I quietly put up my cloak, while looking around. (Now, I think ...

Hello there! Here as requested. First of all, I just wanted to say that your avatar's cool. Jeremy Sumpter? gah! Okay, as for the review... I honestly don't have to ...

Hello there! Here as requested. First of all, I just wanted to say that this is pretty well written. Your choice of words are more or less brilliant and to ...

Hello there! Sorry for the quite delay because I just had a class overnight activity. First and foremost, you really need to capitalize your "I"s. It's not good to look ...

Hello there! Here to review. So I can see that there have been a lot of critiques there and I won't go bothering each line since others have pretty much ...

Hello there! Here to review. The main thing that attracted me to read this was your title. I actually do have the same title of yours. Check out my portfolio ...

Hello there Wish! First of all, I must thank you for the good read. This is quite exceptional that interest me to read the first word until the very last ...

Hey there Seana! Here to review. Hey! Ive put my story to a 16+ sorry for any inconveniences this has caused, now-for the story! :P Trudging miserably up the steps ...

HI there Skinnykins! (haha) I was supposed to review this one yesterday, but accidentally deleted it and I was so sleepy that I didn't have the energy to rewrite it ...