Young Writers Society

Hello there TwinCityKitty! Oh my. Please kill me now. I apologize it took me decades a week to review this. I've been just so busy with college lately-- not that ...

Aloha Draco! First off, I apologize for the delay of this review. I'll do my best here, so hope it will be worth the wait. Also just a heads up, ...

Hello na3f! Thanks for the request! I'm glad I read this piece. Although I'm not much familiar with non-human narrative, I find this refreshing and easy to read. There are ...

Hello Costa! Thanks for the request! As usual, I applaud the great manner of writing. The atmosphere was strongly established throughout the chapter and I loved the new set of ...

Hello there Costa! Oh my. First off, I apologize for the delay. I will do my very best to be of help, so I hope the wait will be worth ...

Hello there Costa! Here as requested :) I noticed that you're fairly new to this site, so I welcome you to YWS and hope you enjoy your stay! Just a ...

Hello Rascalover! Thanks for the request! I know you requested me to review this chapter, but I decided to read the first one so I wouldn't get confused of the ...

Hello there! First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your stay here as much I as do. Okay now to the review. The introduction of the story ...

Hello lovely Lavvie! This was refreshing to read. The main character's thoughts combined with nostalgic approach were expressed well in the story. However, I think this piece was more like ...

Hello Ice! Although you have some sort of a cliche' highschool concept in your story, it was interesting and enjoying to read. Your main character's thoughts and dialog came out ...

Hello Booklover33 and welcome to YWS! :) I'm here to review. A blurry image of a girl trapped in a rustic cell is all I can imagine. First off, whether ...

Hello there! It's been months since I've reviewed anything here so I'm warning you in advance that this might probably be a little vague when read- but I hope you ...

Hello there! That moment when you're almost done reviewing for almost an hour and it suddenly vanished into thin air because you have to sign-in again. 8( Okay. I'll be ...

Hey Cadi! I thought this was pretty good. The story itself entertained me from the first part until the last one. Although, I agree with the reviewers above me that ...

Hello there, Scarlettwinter! First off, I thought this was good. Although honestly at first, the length surprised me but the time I was reading it, it actually didn't bother me. ...