Yrael

Isn't the River Styx something from Mythology? Like where you go after you die?

If you're going to do that you're better off not having a prologue. You're story would be many times better if you left the reader not knowing the origin of ...

The full caps really demolish any rhythm that you could possibly have. Without it, I think it would be much better. I'd give it a shot.

Very true, though I'm not too obsessed with my pages being blank.

Hahahaha! That was great! Spectacular job with the British voice, it was really entertaining.

The first book was good, it's the second two that really make it what it is. As for the world, it is a place where there exist the realms of ...

I have not read them, but I do hear that it starts out spectacular, but then after about the middle of the series the author just draws it out as ...

Alright, I guess I did not really view it as a tip, but I see what you mean.