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Yoshiki

  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Tick Tock

    I think this is a really nicely written story. The concept is interesting and well executed and its really enjoyable. I like that you made the clock have a central ...

    Dec 16, 2015
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: The Game of Life

    I liked this idea of a story a lot. It was innovative and piqued my interest. You've definatly got the inspirational part down, wich I would say is the most ...

    Oct 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Limerence (Edited)

    Okay, I'm going to try to Review this, even though I'm not good at love, nor at reviewing poetry. Because this is no strenght of mine, please do not Think ...

    May 6, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Mistakes

    Well this was an entertaining story... (No that did not sound sadist at all...) The story was good, and I liked your way of creating tension by giving the reader ...

    May 3, 2015
  • Short Story » Literature, Dramatic Re: Cinderella's Happily Ever Never

    I really, really love the idea of this story. (In fact, re-Writings of known stories have Always both amused and intressted me) I also think that this ending is both ...

    May 3, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Crimson Blades

    I liked this story. The story was intriguing and took unexpected turns. I liked the way of writing in some parts of the story, where the author with subtle simplicity ...

    May 1, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Humor Re: Cause of Death

    This story was very well written. The language used had just enough details to highten the suspense, with was what this entire story was resting on. The humor was pretty ...

    Apr 2, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: The Dare

    This is a fairly well-written ghost story. However, the plot is not very original, and it's pretty easy to guess what will happen next. The language is fairly simple, and ...

    Apr 1, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: For sale, one lifetime, poor condition. (Revised and edited)

    This tale is astonishingly beutifull. The language, despite being fairly simple, catches the reader and only makes the story shine even brighter. The only negative thig i have to say ...

    Apr 1, 2015


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