Yitzu

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Thank you very much. v w v Your opinion is noted, keep writing well my friend.

This, this is great. Keep up the good work. ; v ;; Yitzu.

I like your flow here, much better than I could do at writing a poem. Although, I agree with Savy about the unclear image being created and how exactly it ...

I believe this is, indeed, a start of a wonderful story. You've captured my attention and though I have not read the previous chapters, know what the dialogue is referring ...

This is really great. ;w;