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Re: The night I died (the longer version)
Good, I like it. Maybe a little more suspense, but otherwise it is really good
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: The playground is burning
I liked it a lot- very powerful and effective.
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: Paintballing: Dawn of World War 111
Great poem! I love paintballing :)
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Infinite Days
great poem. Very effective
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Beethoven's Virus
yay! i love zombie stories. It's really effective and believable- which not all of these type of stories are. Well done and please continue!
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Death Wish
great. fast and exciting. Please carry on with it, it's really good!
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: What Life Throws at You
Cool, I love things about school. Great dialogue, realistic and effective. I hope you carry on with it.
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: My Aborted Child
Wow, that's amazing. Really effective and realistic.
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Watched - Chapter 1
i loved reading this. Have you posted any of the other chapters. It's great, and it flows well. Keep up the good work! :)
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Poetry Contest
awesome. i love poems about school. please write more soon :)
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Reflection of the Past
Great story opening. Interesting character names, which gave a good mood to the story. The dialogue was realistic and effective. Keep it up!
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: number 1.
very interesting. You have a good style of writing, which i think others will enjoy. keep it up =)
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Lame And Nerdy
true and thoughtful. Great poem :)
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: She killed me.
good use of dialogue, but it is a bit confusing in places
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Death defying
Great story. Exciting and scary.
Apr 3, 2011