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This is really funny. ^^ But I wouldn't consider it poetic... There are enough comments and they all hit the nail on how you can make this more poetic...But from ...

Hiya ^^ I don't think this is pointless. All poetry (All writing in general) has to have a point. Even if it's hard to spot, beaneth all words there is ...

I don't like the first line...I'm gathering it has the same meaning as bitting ones nails or pulling out your hair, ccorrect? It seems to lead up to feeling insecure. ...

Hiya. ^^ Alright I can see the point of the poem very clearly but it's almost like you forced it out. I think it's a bit blane. You have a ...

I love the meaning behind this. It's wonderful that you ccan except you as you. I like the imagery, your diction seems a little blane but that can't be helped. ...

You went a little overboard with your descriptions dear. Over doing the imagery confuses the eye. When you are trying to paint as a masterpiece, be sure not to put ...

^^ Very nice ryme...It's enjoyable and flows well. As for periods, commas , ect. It's a basic, but it doesn't really take from the read. A few of your descriptions ...

Hi ^^ First off, I think this is a very nice poem and it has a good backbone. But there are a few things that are picking at me. The ...