Xreigon

I didn't take it that way :)

I didn't know how to the cross-outs til this letter, so that's why they're only in this one. And I have more, I just haven't posted them...I need to do ...

You're welcome!

Sounds good to me! This is one of those stories that could actually work very well with a prologue. You could go back in time and write a scene about ...

Sorry for putting it in twice. I forgot to say that it was a review, so I was trying to redo it...

This is an extremely beautiful piece. I am not the best at editing poetry, so I will just put in a comment to say that I really liked it. The ...

That was a good suggestion. Thank you!

Oh, and also, the idea is that I will establish their relationship through letters and let that introduce my characters and setting. It is like the reader get to know ...

The idea of the brackets is that I couldn't find the cross-out button in my earlier letters. :) she actually is a bad speller and since on Microsoft Word I ...

That is actually one thing I might want to be ;) am I living up to the challenge yet? Jk jk

Oh, and you CANNOT substitute a comma for a period. That makes no sense and is horribly not grammatically correct.

Thank you to for the information about lions, and thank you to LadyLazarus for the suggestion. It was helpful :)

Essentially, she doesn't really know how she feels. She is annoyed at him, but at the same time, she likes that he likes her, and she loves his letters. I ...

Quite good! Please check your first few sentences. You forgot a couple of spaces in between words. They run together. I enjoyed your plot, and it interested me. I am ...

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