Xirenia

Hey again Empress :) It seems you like my reviews. This makes me happy :D I'm guessing you want me to give you punctuation errors as well? Whatever, if you ...

Hey Empress :) Here to do that review for you :D I really liked this. I don't want to hear this crazy talk of 'not being cut out for poetry'. ...

I enjoyed this a lot :D I love how short is it, but it gets to the point. Everyone else has picked up on the grammar errors, so I can't ...

Hey there :) Shame, I was browsing and I saw that no one had commented on this for you, so I thought I'd do a review :) All my grammar ...

Hey Loveless, I'm here to do a review for you :) I'll put all my grammar corrections in red, and explain other points below. If I rewrite a sentence to ...

Hey :) Here to do a review for you Every breath I take is painful, and after each one, I do not wish to take another on account of the ...

Hey hey, May I first say that you are a wonderful writer. I'd describe your style as dreamy, and airy. And romantic, of course :D It's lovely. So, here are ...

Gentle snowflakes, flirting with the sky. I'm not so sure sky rhymes with sky, but it's not a big issue My feeble hands touch the window sill, Anxious for him ...

Hey, hey :D Her tears of ice Raining down upon the tide . As midnight falls The depths of the ocean grow oh so wide . Also, I think maybe ...

Hey there :D You never loved me. I don't agree with Sasha. I think this line is good. Granted, I think it would have been better at the end, but ...

So...I'm sitting here, right? And I'm wondering to myself why some people just get to be so talented. And I'm thinking, it's just not fair. There isn't some way you ...

Wow, that was amazing... The first two lines really hit you. It's really meaningful, and you don't guess that you're talking about a father until the very end. The punctuation ...

This is good, there are just some key elements you need to fix to make it great :D 1 . You need to chose which tense you're writing in. Right ...

Hey :D Thought I'd review this lovely prologue for you. I'll put in bold how I think it could be improved. I'll never forget the day Ant was taken from ...

I like :D This is a very good prologue. It leaves a lot to the imagination and makes you wonder what you're actually implying. Young Gun, before me, thinks that ...