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Xirenia

  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Just Friends

    Hi :) So, I like this quite a lot. It's coherent, doesn't jump around through different ideas erratically. It's also kind of fun; you want to find out whether Alex ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Love Notes

    I think I've had this exact thought - definitely had my heart broken by a royal jerk who seemed like a possible soul mate. What I'm saying is this is ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Overwhelmed

    This is really interesting. I suppose it's one of those poems where you take what you want from it, as it doesn't seem to have a definite meaning. Absolutely nothing ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Nephilim

    Wow guys... This is truly spectacular. Poetry is such a hard thing to nail down, but you've done it perfectly. There was nowhere that it didn't flow or used any ...

    Apr 6, 2011
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Tabooboo - A parody of Taboo

    Wow... I don't know how I'm going to top everyone's praise. Uh, marry me? Please? Seriously though, this was frickin' hilarious. I haven't read all of Taboo or SOA but ...

    Jan 6, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Dear Mom (Hair Story)

    Aw, I love this :) I can't say that I relate too much, having long hair that I'm completely obsessive about, but I think this is a great and certainly ...

    Jan 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: What we are

    Holy mother... I don't know how to accurately put my thoughts into words. Kamas, it is absolutely crazy how talented you are, and especially for your age. I am so ...

    Jan 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: You're Perfect

    This is a very sweet poem :) I like it a lot. I had two nitpicks: I exit my abode into the outside world There's something way too formal about ...

    Dec 20, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Chapt 1:Not after everything we'd shared..

    Hello kakagirl :) I don't have time right now to get into the small nitpicks, but I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this beginning. It's interesting to ...

    Dec 17, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Lady Monterray

    Wow, I really liked this :) Like the others said, you really do have the writing style of a professional. Very sophisticated and lyrical. There was only one nitpick that ...

    Dec 17, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Best Friends.

    Wow, Drawer, this is really good. To be honest, I think some people are over nitpicking it to suit their taste and that irritates me a little bit. You write ...

    Dec 16, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Loved Him

    Wow, this is really good stuff. I can't say I've ever seen this style of poetry (But then again it's not my forte). I really like it. It gives the ...

    Apr 12, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Nothing

    Heya Comrie :) Here are a few things I noticed: 101 Should be a hundred and one But, no, unlike the other lucky bastards out there either playing Wii, screwing ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Carpe Diem (We will not be forgotten) [Working Title]

    Hey hey :) Finally doing that review for you. Sorry if I repeat anything anyone else has said. I'll put any small corrections in red on the quote :D Life, ...

    Jan 31, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Silver Blade Chapter Two

    Hey Kaywiia...I am (finally) here to give you that review. I'm so sorry it's taken so long. I'll put any small or grammar corrections in red on the quotes, and ...

    Jan 31, 2010


You got rid of them. Yes, that's just like you. Getting rid of everything unpleasant instead of learning to put up with it.
— Aldous Huxley, Brave New World