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Re: Just Friends
Hi :) So, I like this quite a lot. It's coherent, doesn't jump around through different ideas erratically. It's also kind of fun; you want to find out whether Alex ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Love Notes
I think I've had this exact thought - definitely had my heart broken by a royal jerk who seemed like a possible soul mate. What I'm saying is this is ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: Overwhelmed
This is really interesting. I suppose it's one of those poems where you take what you want from it, as it doesn't seem to have a definite meaning. Absolutely nothing ...
Dec 7, 2011 -
Re: Nephilim
Wow guys... This is truly spectacular. Poetry is such a hard thing to nail down, but you've done it perfectly. There was nowhere that it didn't flow or used any ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Tabooboo - A parody of Taboo
Wow... I don't know how I'm going to top everyone's praise. Uh, marry me? Please? Seriously though, this was frickin' hilarious. I haven't read all of Taboo or SOA but ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Dear Mom (Hair Story)
Aw, I love this :) I can't say that I relate too much, having long hair that I'm completely obsessive about, but I think this is a great and certainly ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: What we are
Holy mother... I don't know how to accurately put my thoughts into words. Kamas, it is absolutely crazy how talented you are, and especially for your age. I am so ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: You're Perfect
This is a very sweet poem :) I like it a lot. I had two nitpicks: I exit my abode into the outside world There's something way too formal about ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: Chapt 1:Not after everything we'd shared..
Hello kakagirl :) I don't have time right now to get into the small nitpicks, but I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this beginning. It's interesting to ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Lady Monterray
Wow, I really liked this :) Like the others said, you really do have the writing style of a professional. Very sophisticated and lyrical. There was only one nitpick that ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Best Friends.
Wow, Drawer, this is really good. To be honest, I think some people are over nitpicking it to suit their taste and that irritates me a little bit. You write ...
Dec 16, 2010 -
Re: I Loved Him
Wow, this is really good stuff. I can't say I've ever seen this style of poetry (But then again it's not my forte). I really like it. It gives the ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Nothing
Heya Comrie :) Here are a few things I noticed: 101 Should be a hundred and one But, no, unlike the other lucky bastards out there either playing Wii, screwing ...
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: Carpe Diem (We will not be forgotten) [Working Title]
Hey hey :) Finally doing that review for you. Sorry if I repeat anything anyone else has said. I'll put any small corrections in red on the quote :D Life, ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Silver Blade Chapter Two
Hey Kaywiia...I am (finally) here to give you that review. I'm so sorry it's taken so long. I'll put any small or grammar corrections in red on the quotes, and ...
Jan 31, 2010
