Wulie

It's been a long time since I've come here and your peom caught my heart straight away this makes me muchly happy :) restores my faith in poetry! your eyes ...

To be fair this poem didn't capture me like the rest of your poems maybe it was it just to plain maybe I expect a little more from you. Yes ...

This was a really beautiful poems the words flowing wonderfully I love it when the first line catches me as yours did and to the end it kept me mesmerised ...

Not a great poem, I'm afraid. The lay out was terrible it made it harder for the reader to read, which is highly important of course, not only that when ...

I really loved it you're such a great writer you seem to catch me from the start till the end :) - I am short of time so I can't ...

The poem seemed very dull nothing to it, I'm sure it could have been wonderful and you have the right ideas but its just so repatative - and I know ...

This poem threw me there isn't any other poems like this on here! At first I though no I don't like the 'SHOUUUUT' but I begin to warm to the ...

loved it really did a real refreshing poem not to have ot stumbled on the words or try to figure out the meaning of the stanza. It was a very ...

Rightio I liked it firstly however I did have to read it a few times because of the first stanza it just seemed disjointed from the poem like it has ...

I liekd but didnt love it, I don't think it really fits under dramitc poerty for one, and it seemed very jumbled however as brads shown it in stanzas thats ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem it was plain and simple yet complex the words not to powerful but enough to keep you holding on. The start was amazing it ...

If thats your drunken writing - that is pretty darn good ( damn I wished I was better at ripping things apart) Music creeps out from under my brother's door ...

I love it at first reading title I was like hmmm the begining wasn't that great but the ending made up for it really powerful and shocks the reader, for ...

Wow I have to say this is one of the only poems yo have written which I have loved so very much I am not saying you're a bad writer ...

This is different from your usual poems a little more simple, proberlly why I like it so! Does the satin on your bed remind you of white walls, fresh paint, ...