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WrittenInStone

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: His Family Picture

    I swear, this poem has moved me so much that I began to cry. I feel the same way about what your first reviewer pointed out. I do think, that ...

    Nov 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Standing alone

    Like your previous reviewer pointed out, I was also wondering if that was supposed to be a question and that you should add the question mark if it was. Otherwise, ...

    Nov 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Absense makes the Heart grow fonder?

    This is a wonderful poem, and I'm sorry of your discovery. I truly feel the way this poem's emotions flow with the sadness and the confusion and the wonder of ...

    Nov 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Stranger

    Wow, that was wonderfully written. I especially loved the first two lines, "A stranger, that's what you are You're in a disguise and it hurts in my heart" Those words ...

    Nov 9, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I Thought Death Was Like Winter

    I can really relate to this poem, for it is alot like what had happened when I lost my grandfather .. It wasn't until a month after did I realize ...

    Nov 9, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Asotsuko:Prologue (NaNoWriMo '10)

    I find that your writting here is wonderful, the use of adjectives is well performed though I do think you should check your spelling it isn't bad at all. I ...

    Nov 9, 2010


I was promis'd on a time, To have a reason for my rhyme: From that time unto this season, I receiv'd nor rhyme nor reason.
— Edmund Spenser