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Re: His Family Picture
I swear, this poem has moved me so much that I began to cry. I feel the same way about what your first reviewer pointed out. I do think, that ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: Standing alone
Like your previous reviewer pointed out, I was also wondering if that was supposed to be a question and that you should add the question mark if it was. Otherwise, ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: Absense makes the Heart grow fonder?
This is a wonderful poem, and I'm sorry of your discovery. I truly feel the way this poem's emotions flow with the sadness and the confusion and the wonder of ...
Nov 10, 2010 -
Re: Stranger
Wow, that was wonderfully written. I especially loved the first two lines, "A stranger, that's what you are You're in a disguise and it hurts in my heart" Those words ...
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: I Thought Death Was Like Winter
I can really relate to this poem, for it is alot like what had happened when I lost my grandfather .. It wasn't until a month after did I realize ...
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: Asotsuko:Prologue (NaNoWriMo '10)
I find that your writting here is wonderful, the use of adjectives is well performed though I do think you should check your spelling it isn't bad at all. I ...
Nov 9, 2010
