WritingAngel777

Love it! This chapter was even better than the prologue! You pulled me in with the prologue and you kept my attention nailed down with this chapter! Well done! Again ...

Amazing! This is a wonderful piece of work here and an excellent beginning to your novel! I definitely have to say that I was pulled into your world quite quickly. ...

Hey! I have to say that I really enjoyed reading this chapter as well! It was as beautifully written as the first, and I loved that you kept up with ...

Hey! I really enjoyed reading this chapter! At first I was a little critical-it started out kind of slow, and I began to wonder if this was going to turn ...

Hey there! I have to say that you definitely caught my attention with this story! Your writing was incredible, your setting was fascinating, your plot was addictive, and your main ...

Hey! I have to say that you really grabbed my attention! I think this was really well done and I love the journal idea! It's very "Perks of being a ...

Hey! You definitely got my attention back with this chapter! It was exactly what I was craving in the previous chapter, however it began to drag on after a certain ...

Hey! So, compared to the prologue (which was amazing) and the first chapter (which was great), I found myself getting bored during this chapter. I even resorted to skimming at ...

Hey! :) You are extremely talented! I really enjoyed reading what you wrote and this was a great addition to your story! I really liked that the prologue was part ...

Hey! I have to say that I love love love this! It was very well written and the ending was absolutely perfect! I do however agree with "StellaThomas" about the ...

Hey! So, I see from your picture and your writing that you're a huge "Tomb Raider" fan (I am too). I like that you're coming up with your own story ...