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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Sparrowhawk Soar

    Hey Maddy! I'm sorry it took me so long to get to this, but I'm here! :D All right, you have some pretty intense emotions in this scene and I ...

    Jan 20, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Dark Tide (Chapter 2.1)

    Hey there cosby! Tis WD, as requested! I'm glad you called me over here to take a look at this. So, I have not read your prologue and chapter 1, ...

    Jan 13, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Ante-Purgatory

    Hey there foxfire! Tis WD, here as requested. ^^ This is a pretty nifty piece. Because it's so short, I'll go through it paragraph by paragraph, kays? By his feet, ...

    Jan 13, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: [Deleted]

    Hey there Elinor! Tis WD, as requested. :wink: Glad I got to read this piece. You have a nice, flowing style that's easy to read, but you strike complexity once ...

    Jan 12, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Demon Sits Behind Me at School

    Hey there pudin! Tis WD, as requested. :wink: I'm glad I got to read this piece. You have some interesting ideas and I especially liked the touch with the main ...

    Jan 12, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Four Letters

    Hey there! All right, I'm going to have to agree with Conrad on this piece. You see, you have a wonderful grasp of pattern. Your idea of using all four ...

    Jan 11, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Today She Dreams

    Shina! Hey hey, tis WD as promised. :wink: This was a lovely short story; I love glitter. So when she started tossing glitter around, I was wearing this big, silly ...

    Jan 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Laugh at the World

    Hey Kate! Look! I'm reviewing a poem! Okay, so this confused me a bit. Like Knightley, I didn't really get what the narrator was talking about! The narrator seemed to ...

    Jan 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Wild Horses Of The Sea [Edit]

    Hey there Lydia! All right, as has been said, I like the idea here. It was really fun to read and you had a few simply dazzling lines! Great job! ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Til Kingdom Come - a post apocalyptic WIP

    Hey superasian! Tis WD, finally here! :D Sorry it took me so long! All right, so I'm just going to touch on a few things here. We'll start with the ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: the game

    Hey there, I'm WD! I am pleased to take a look at your poem. This is an interesting piece, but I think if you're going to try and present an ...

    Jan 6, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Right

    Hi there! I'm WD and your poem is the first in this piece of time I have carved out for reviewing. :wink: So, I'm going to have to agree with ...

    Jan 6, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Ouraul Pt. 1

    Hey Conrad! I am here, as promised! :D I'm glad I got to read this. Pretty nifty piece and I am left wanting to read more. Of course, I was ...

    Jan 5, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Wrong Side Ch. 1

    Hey Hippie! I'm glad I got around to this! Sorry it took me so long! So, you have a very snappy story here. It's very fast-paced and exciting and you ...

    Jan 5, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: How to Live - Chapter One

    Hey Xirenia! Tis WD; I'm glad I finally got around to this! So, I thought this was a solid beginning; you have some good ideas and Rory is already defined ...

    Jan 5, 2010


Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins