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Re: Sparrowhawk Soar
Hey Maddy! I'm sorry it took me so long to get to this, but I'm here! :D All right, you have some pretty intense emotions in this scene and I ...
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: Dark Tide (Chapter 2.1)
Hey there cosby! Tis WD, as requested! I'm glad you called me over here to take a look at this. So, I have not read your prologue and chapter 1, ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: Ante-Purgatory
Hey there foxfire! Tis WD, here as requested. ^^ This is a pretty nifty piece. Because it's so short, I'll go through it paragraph by paragraph, kays? By his feet, ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: [Deleted]
Hey there Elinor! Tis WD, as requested. :wink: Glad I got to read this piece. You have a nice, flowing style that's easy to read, but you strike complexity once ...
Jan 12, 2010 -
Re: A Demon Sits Behind Me at School
Hey there pudin! Tis WD, as requested. :wink: I'm glad I got to read this piece. You have some interesting ideas and I especially liked the touch with the main ...
Jan 12, 2010 -
Re: Four Letters
Hey there! All right, I'm going to have to agree with Conrad on this piece. You see, you have a wonderful grasp of pattern. Your idea of using all four ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Today She Dreams
Shina! Hey hey, tis WD as promised. :wink: This was a lovely short story; I love glitter. So when she started tossing glitter around, I was wearing this big, silly ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Laugh at the World
Hey Kate! Look! I'm reviewing a poem! Okay, so this confused me a bit. Like Knightley, I didn't really get what the narrator was talking about! The narrator seemed to ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Wild Horses Of The Sea [Edit]
Hey there Lydia! All right, as has been said, I like the idea here. It was really fun to read and you had a few simply dazzling lines! Great job! ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Til Kingdom Come - a post apocalyptic WIP
Hey superasian! Tis WD, finally here! :D Sorry it took me so long! All right, so I'm just going to touch on a few things here. We'll start with the ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: the game
Hey there, I'm WD! I am pleased to take a look at your poem. This is an interesting piece, but I think if you're going to try and present an ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Right
Hi there! I'm WD and your poem is the first in this piece of time I have carved out for reviewing. :wink: So, I'm going to have to agree with ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: The Ouraul Pt. 1
Hey Conrad! I am here, as promised! :D I'm glad I got to read this. Pretty nifty piece and I am left wanting to read more. Of course, I was ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: The Wrong Side Ch. 1
Hey Hippie! I'm glad I got around to this! Sorry it took me so long! So, you have a very snappy story here. It's very fast-paced and exciting and you ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: How to Live - Chapter One
Hey Xirenia! Tis WD; I'm glad I finally got around to this! So, I thought this was a solid beginning; you have some good ideas and Rory is already defined ...
Jan 5, 2010
