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Re: Renegade children page 3
Hey there questcrewforever! I'm sorry it took me so long to get to this! Great to see you're continuing this! So, I'm being introduced to more characters here, and you ...
Apr 23, 2010 -
Re: Prologue - Pawns (Stand in Name) - Novel
Hi there HomelessPorcupine! I apologize that it took me so long to get to this revised version of the prologue--nevertheless, I am here, and I'm glad to see you working ...
Apr 23, 2010 -
Re: Medusa
Hey there Elinor! You have already gotten some great comments on this, so I'll try not to repeat too much of what has been said, but a lot of my ...
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Two ~ Part two)
Hey there again, Skins! Glad I could get to this second part. :wink: As I mentioned in the first part, you have a great writing style going here. Excellent pacing, ...
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: Renegade children page 2
Hi there quest! Finally made it to review this. :wink: All right, so I'm starting to get a feel for your characters in this part; this isn't as telling-heavy as ...
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Two)
Hey there Skins! Tis WD, as requested! I'm glad I got to make it over here and read this--you really have a way with crafting the flow of the story. ...
Apr 10, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart - Ch-1(Olivia)
Hey there Shubhi! Tis WD! So, this first chapter was a lot easier to read than your prologue--I quite like a lot of the detail you've put into this. There ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: Renegade Children
Hey there questcrewforever! WD, as requested. :wink: I apologize for the delay. So, this is interesting. You are a good writer; you know how to craft easy, flowing sentences. Your ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart-Prologue (REVISED)
Hey there! Tis WD here, as requested. ^^ Sorry it has taken me so long. This is coming along--you definitely have some interesting ideas going on here and this has ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Reg Carter: Deep Cover (Chapt. 4)
BenFranks! Hello, tis WD as requested. I'm sorry it took me so long to get to this! This is really going rather nicely so far--your dialogue especially shines. It is ...
Mar 20, 2010 -
Re: lit analysis 'how to read like a professor', not recommended
Moved to Book Reviews. Anyways, I personally enjoyed the "How to Read Literature/Novels Like a Professor" books by Thomas C. Foster. Admittedly, for literary analysis, they were not anything spectacul
Mar 15, 2010 -
Re: Shades of Violet(1)[revised]
Hey there, Valentine! Tis WD, as requested. I really enjoyed this; you have a strong, engaging writing style that held my interest for the entire piece. The idea itself is ...
Mar 6, 2010 -
Re: Finding me back-Prologue(Final edit) Please re -read
Hey there! Tis WD, as requested! As has been mentioned, you have an interesting idea here... but, also, as has been said, it is confusing right now. The Melanie/Jemima confusion ...
Mar 6, 2010 -
Re: X
Hey there Lauren! Tis WD as requested! I really enjoyed reading this--I especially liked how the reader could not be entirely sure if Nolen was truly an enemy or rather ...
Mar 6, 2010 -
Re: The Assassin's Redemption Chapter 1 Part 2
Hey there Kanen! At last, I have made it to chapter 1 part 2. ^^ This was quite a bit better than part 1--good job! I can tell you are ...
Mar 6, 2010