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This was really good, you know, I'm curious as to who this mysterious Nathaniel kid is and I cannot wait to read more. It's keeping me wondering about how Lily's ...

This is so beautiful it's unbelievible. I couldn't stop reading from the first line of the first stanza to the last line of the last stanza. It captures the true ...

This was short. No worries, I find that the shorter the poem the more powerful they usually are and I think yours is one of the most powerful ones I've ...

Really well donecepts were beautiful and very well said. I could see everything as I was reading it and everything made crystal clear and precise sense. Please, don't change a ...

Your glass stairs my crack and crumble, I believe you meant may instead of my. Overall, besides that tiny mistake, I found this poem very well-done and amazing. I really ...

The Fate I Never Chose. Wow. I really like the title it says something without even meaning to. I didn't see any grammatical mistakes I'd just like to say that ...

What happens next? That is my only question, I am anxious to read it. Cannot wait for you to bring out chapter one. I'll try to be the first one ...

I really enjoyed this but for some reason I just couldn't see myself in it. Now this isn't something to be worried about, no. This is something to be grateful ...

Very well done though it did have one tiny flaw. It could be a bit shorter, now usually I'd say ROCK ON! This poem is great because I love long ...

Interesting. That is all I really can say to this one. It must have been a very interesting dream. Though on the downside, I found it was very confusing at ...

First one to review!!! Alright, I guess that means I have to be the one to give you constructive crictism. Honestly, I didn't see anything wrong with this poem at ...

Another great chapter, though I really wish it would've been longer because I'm still so anxious as to what happens next. Lol. If you get some time in, I'd really ...

[ b]Wow. I like your reference to Anne Frank in this poem. It really helped me understand the stanza a little bit more. I didn't see anything wrong as far ...

Amazing, yet again. You really have talent, everything you write just has this sense about it. I can feel as the characters are feeling and visualize it as well. I ...

so interesting. I read the first couple of chapters but it was this one that really intruiges me. I wasn't excpecting it to get better and better with each chapter ...