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Have made the corrections. Thanks!

Thanks you so much for the review. I'll work on the suggestions given. In this line "He struck hard on you can't never be a chide," I related the strikings ...

Thank you so much! It was encouraging. No apologies BTW you kept your word. I am glad you liked it. :)

Welcomed :)

Welcomed.

Absolutely, it is hard to accept that it is the world we live in.

That's so kind of you to say. Thank you * hugs*

Thank you so much! Your words were encouraging and motivating. Thanks again for the response. Your words made me so happy :)

Hope you enjoy your vacation. Stay healthy.Thanks for the response. :)

Any suggestions for the non- edited one?

In third stanza, I meant, Eventhough I die the moment which won't die is the instant I saw my love. I better words, the image of my beloved won't leave ...

Thank you so much for the review, will work on the suggestions given. How is your health now? Take care.

Yes, I totally agree with your point.One needs to be aware then. I sometimes think, maybe we should judge. But this damn heart never.LOL.

Yeah, I totally agree. It's barely acceptable. But, I also believe everything happens for a reason. Maybe, this time the world will be peaceful and hope to see a different ...

Thank you so much. I'll focus on the suggestions given. Learning a lot!